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Matt
Apr 11 2013, 12:31 PM
This isn't a half-bad script today. I like Jennifer/Laura's dialog, but there's too much of a background of WTFery with the whole story.
Wow. I just read the summary and was shocked by how bad Laura/Jennifer's dialogue was. I expected it to be bad, but it was just laughable. I guess it is hard to spin that kind of WTFery. It was just so heavy handed though. "LISTEN TO US: JENNIFER IS GOOD. JENNIFER IS SELF SACRIFICING AND NOT TELLING DAN WAS HER ONLY OPTION. JENNIFER LOVES DANIEL WITH HER WHOLE HEART, DARNIT! (And she knows she has a son, and she loves him too!)" Sorry for the all caps, but that's how the script felt to me. When the story and the characters' motivations need that kind of in your face writing, there is something that isn't standing on its own there.
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